Aeorys

I have taken the time to lay out some of this information in the thread concerning your profile; speaking of which, there are several specifics I feel compelled to mention if you are to be approved anytime soon. - You have a tendency to 'editorialize' your descriptions of the character - that is, rather than give composite, tangible descriptions of the character's traits, you list aspects of her as simply 'beautiful' or 'charming' without elaboration. Please refrain from empty adjectives, and instead describe the character in purely image-based terms (i.e. describe what it is that makes her eyes so charming rather than simply saying that th